Webpage revisions

Hi folks, rather than use a wiki page to work on the webpages (which can begin to look quite cluttered after a while) I thought it was easier to:

• attach word documents of each relevant page – see attachments in sidebar
• download those and make changes in track changes or as comments
• upload the new version for the next person to look at

Please change the document title to show that it’s been revised in some way. I’d suggest adding the date thus: document.031211.doc. If you revise on the same day as someone else perhaps add a version number: document.031211.v2.doc.

For now I’m suggesting that we revise our rhizomenetwork.wordpress.com/about/valu... and rhizomenetwork.wordpress.com/about/thou... pages

Some thoughts on what needs to be added/changed given our November ’11 meeting (from memory):

• The whole tone! – these pages were written in order to entice people to join a conversation with us, which they did to a minimal degree. Time to rewrite them as a statement rather than a question?
• Radical – we had a long and interesting discussion about being radical that’s not reflected in the about us, as it currently stands
• Co-operation – one of the draws of Rhizome to those who’ve recently joined it seems to be the space for collaboration, shared learning and mutual support
• Relationships – Emily made a point about “what it means to be a colleague” which I don’t think is reflected in existing pages but should be